Saturday, July 10, 2010

untitled (giacometti)

you said
living with me
was like having
a giacometti sculpture
in your back pocket. that's hardly
a compliment
for an accomplice. am i that prickly
and artsy that you would have
me limned as a linear
exertion?

i don't need to go over
and over, revisiting the lines
of you as i inscribe your face in my mind.
it is a sad one, your face. i hate to think
that i've made it that way, but so be it. you'd
rather hear it from a stranger - that color
is incidental and washy - not something
defining your world; not really even enhancing
what has, for you, been determined to be
so black and white that there's no room
for the grisaille.

(c) jim hill (07-10-10)

untitled (today anyway)

it's different than
the way you told it
i'm fine with that

what time did you say
we were finished?
is it that your eyes
can't wash away
what you imagine?
is there no reconciling
vision with what i know
to be real?

i look out on a
lake
and see the darkness
underneath
whole towns
and villages
swept under
a wave of progress; you
insist on seeing the reflection
of the clouds. who gets the most
out of the truth? is it the surface
that tells us the most of what
we want to see? if you learn
the answer leave a message.

(c) jim hill (07-10-10)